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Journey to heaven

Taking a new step, into the darkness of the unknown
Not knowing what lies ahead,following the light that i've been shown
Leaving behind the memories and the past that haunts each day
Floating through an abyss, past the place that i lay
The overwhelming feeling, of freedoom, joy and peace
The silence of my surroundings, where corruption will cease
Looking down beneath me,where loved ones are gathered around;
the body of a young girl, who lays eternally asleep and sound

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  • xkadiex
    February 23, 2008
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    this is great