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My Bed!

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My Bed!

I once had a big fat cat.
Now what do you think of that?
He committed a kitty sin.
He jumped on my chest with a grin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Clerihew
A Clerihew is a comic verse consisting of two couplets and a specific rhyming scheme, usually aabb. The poem is about/deals with a person/character within the first rhyme.

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  • penman gold member
    December 27, 2007
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    Excellent

    Aww, this was great. Such a creative poem.

  • NeferMaatNetjer silver member
    December 7, 2007
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    my fat kitty does that to me all the time


  • Ithica silver member
    December 6, 2007

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    My two jump on my chest also. One gives me eskimo kisses and the other always turns around and sticks her butt in my face? Just what "I" want to look at first thing in the morning? This was a very cute "Clerihew" (gotta look that one up now)


  • Swan song gold member
    December 3, 2007

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    I love this one So did you toss him out the door.
    George my cat does that then he head buts me! Dam cat. Loved it dear!


  • Moodayo-Okohke silver member
    November 27, 2007

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    LOL...this is very cute my Little Blue Star...still laughing over here...That kitty is big enough to knock the wind clean out of your chest...lol

    ~YOUR WARRIOR~
    and UNCLE

    BLACK CROW


  • And Hyetal
    November 26, 2007

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    Isn't it annoying when kitties do that? It's like, "oof." Anyways, I love the Clerihew and good luck in the contest!

    Always,
    Cassie


  • Melodies
    November 26, 2007

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    HEHEHE!!!

    Jumped on your chest? OH, what a smart 'ol cat! AND what a darling poem!


  • Ellis gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    Worse things than that
    I have done
    All it is is a cat
    having fun!

    Tiki Cat
    (really a MEAN bugger)
    -----------


    • Amera gold member
      November 26, 2007
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      hehe... so it was you that jumped on my chest!


  • soulfultia gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    Just what Melodies ordered ha! Excellent and cute!!! Love the Picture ~Tia


  • HaleyMary
    November 25, 2007

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    lol. This was cute. I loved this poem. It reminds me a lot of my cat. My cat is also very fat and there are times I have to pick him up and move him over because he's so friendly he tries to get right up to my face and almost smothers me... well I'm exaggerating a little, yes. Good luck in the contest, Sis.


  • JohnnyD gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    I have one 16 pounder that likes to jump from the dresser to my chest at times and its like "upmmmmmphhh"!


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 25, 2007

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    Cute!!!!

    Amera,
    Cute litle write about your big fat cat
    Love the pic
    Ya know there is much truth to this poem...
    Once a kitty cat claim the bed, it becomes his or her domain MEOW!
    take care and good luck!
    ~David~


  • PerVirtuous
    November 25, 2007
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    Very cute.


  • freespirit51
    November 25, 2007

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    This is a really cute clerihew. Sounds like it would be a cute form to write. I poet.t reminds me of the cats I used to have. Good luck in the contest


  • WhisperingSpirit
    November 25, 2007
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    Ha Ha this is just to cute


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    well done my love.
    ENjoyed this little kitty titty humor.

    Laid on the chest..........
    silence...
    well done
    Mistress Passions


  • FallingTwilight
    November 25, 2007

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    This is too cute! Well done, I like the rhyme and form you used in this piece. Good luck!

    -Kaitlyn


  • Cup-a-Joe
    November 25, 2007
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    Was he smoking a cigarette? lol
    Nice poem.
    Joe

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