dancing before dawn
sparkling crystals of ice
bow to yellow sun
A contest entry
- Winter Haiku by Swan song.
480 points, ended December 5, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is very beautiful well done I enjoyed this very much
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Humbled. THIS IS EXCELLENT. Well done. ~Pamela
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Wow! This is amazingly beautiful. I think it's the best winter haiku I have read. Terrific image.
Love,
Amera♥
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Beautiful and the artwork is so bright it makes me squint my eyes.
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Outstanding winter haiku--good luck in the contest!
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Beautiful haiku. I loved the imagery in this piece. Just wonderful. Good luck in the contest.
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Fradgile system aye
Very creative my dear! Excellent write on nature's best> Perfect pic too! Love it my friend, Don 
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Beautifully penned Missy! Love it
~Tia
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Luna, you are inspirational
Of dawn's golden light
twinkling icicles dripping
their tears, one by one
Len
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Beautiful visual.
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This is an awesom haiku. You did a fabulous & fantastic job with this. God bless you and keep up the amazing work.
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Really impressive Haiku, Deb, captures the whole zen feel perfectly.
PJ
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Very nice.
Joe
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