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I'm awake

 

 

 

 

fingers of light

 

creeping

to tickle the day awake

 

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 26, 2007
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    well done xxx peter


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    Oh I love your choice of words in this Congratulations on your lovley shiny
    Gaylene


  • WarrioroftheHeart gold member
    November 25, 2007
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    Very nice take on the picture, well done in the contest.

    Adrian


  • HeavenScent4U
    November 25, 2007

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    very nicely done my dear you have a great sense of imagery best of luck. be well and be blessed


  • ZachP gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    a very interesting take on the prompt.

    Nicely done... and as Ryan said, very unique!

    Good luck in the contest.


  • Ryno
    November 25, 2007

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    Really seriously good imagery I don't think I could've thought of it in that way. Excellent.


  • Ryno
    November 25, 2007
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    pics up

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