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View From the Mountain Top

Black muddy coal dust
covered the scenery
Darkness was penetrating

Author notes

I couldn't it sorry it is beautiful

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  • crimsondew
    November 26, 2007
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    Wow

    Very well written..You captured a moment really well in these lines!


  • ZachP silver member
    November 25, 2007

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    Simple, and effective... it does seem that the darkness is very powerful in that picture

    Good luck!


  • Ryno
    November 25, 2007
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    Your poem is beautiful. I really liked the imagery here, paints a good picture.

  • Ryno
    November 25, 2007
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    pics up