Carelessly selfish,
the scars
tell the tales...
of raping man.
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Prompt: picture
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie: Super Seven [Pic Prompt] by Ryno.
300 points, ended November 25, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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dunno
like the words, but they dont really connect to the picture for me. you see what you see however, its not up to me, i'm just saying i hear what you say but dont see what you see. powerful in any case -
Wow.
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wow... this is really good Great Auntie Bel... wow... I wish I could do this... it's like ya... Love it! Meg
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very well done as always. strong and powerful. best of luck. be well and be blessed
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Short, but very hard hitting!!
Good luck in the contest
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Very dark. I loved your take on the picture, I donno if others will view the poem on me, but it is almost like this person was physcologically damaged and now they see the world this way... I donno, thats the way I felt, the poem connects good with the picture.
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pics up
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