Think of how wonder us it would be
If I could right a poem of thee
It would be of the instruments you've played
intelligence laid out
for all to see
instead of just me
It would be of manners so polite
lovely like the sky at night
It would be of you and me
us and we
Wait but could it be so lovely
like a painting in front of me
so perfect
so right
It would be of thee and thy
you and I
could it be so perfectly
But wait could it be
that I love you
and you love me
think of us
and we
and what should be
what shall be
of you and me
It would be of you and me
us and we
what should I do?
tell you?
how I feel of you
should I stumble and fall
again
losing my friend
the answer to this
would be the end
A contest entry
- I have flu by Entwining Beauty.
380 points, ended November 28, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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It reminds me of a poem i once read only i can not remember the name. wonderful poem thank you for enetering into my contest
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awesome
totally cool
very good for such a young writer
i can't even use those words
definitely awesome!
keep it ^
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Nice,
You did a wonderful job with your write. I really enjotyed reading it. Keep up the creative works.
Xoxoxo,
~Night Mistress 1~ -
I like this poem its...its awesome
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