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Aisles of Madness

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voices with echo’s laughter
unite as aroma drifts, and amidst
contentment’s gaze, children
play hide and seek

with Charley Chaplin-style
they rush to answer beck and call,
and serving those in their wait,
they tender plastic smiles

while closing brings end of day
exhaustion plays tricks with feet;
tables set for another race
within these aisles of madness

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  • penman gold member
    November 27, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.