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What part of my heart do you share?

What part of my heart
what part of me
what part of my life and time do you see?
Is it gentle, sensitive, warm with pleasure
Parting from the norm, partial to the regular
unorthodox chamber you frequent at your leisure

Perhaps it’s the warrior, that conquers your soul
passionate and forceful from eons untold
Is it both, a portion
a little of each.
Reserving a segment neither portion will reach
out to connect or reconnect to their bond
This you’ll never know
This you’ll never see
Through mask you never saw, Mask I secretly donned 
Portions succumbs devouring memories of another
Forgetting emotions, feelings revealed by others
Will you cherish new thoughts?
Will you choose to place fault?
On the advocate between the balance and scales of my heart
Or arrive from the ending from the commencement at the start
But what part of my heart,
or my mind do you share?
Can it be the feminine portion sitting close as you stare?
Attracting your masculine thoughts, your desire, so clear?
Again the question asks,
what part do you share?
Surrendered to you so do you truly,
truly
care?

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Are you willing to share?

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  • raingoddess gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    Deep

    This is a very deep and heartfelt poem, this poem hits home, I can relate as I am sure that many can relate to it.

    Are you willing to share?
    Willing to share even the
    smallest part of your heart.
    Do I get to keep and have it
    under lock and key.
    I can give you a part of me,
    a tiny token of my affection.
    Would you care?
    If I wore my heart on my
    sleeve, grab my hand,
    it is yours to take,
    the secret locked
    beyond the door.
    Do you have the key?

    This is an excellent write, it is not often that I am so inspired by thw words of a poet, I had to get this down before a I lost it, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.

    raingoddess


    • Mykeee
      December 4, 2007

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      Please write this in a full setting. This is amazing response to what has inspired you. I thank you dearly.


  • CherryOnTop
    November 29, 2007
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    This is so gorgeous. Thanks for sharing.

    • Mykeee
      December 4, 2007
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      Did I say thank U? If not here's another. Thank U


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    November 26, 2007

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    Oh my.....

    I love this Definately my favorite write. I love the myserty in this piece...are you willing? Is the ultimate question here. Great flow on eash stanza. Speechless and in Awe of your words.

    ephiphany

    • Mykeee
      November 26, 2007
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      O really - I thought it was a bit unorthodox but glad U liked it.


  • ennovy silver member
    November 25, 2007

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    Reflections of The Romantic

    I'm sure Son after reading this someone would be willing to share even if its for a little while. This would makes a lady think! Do I care? What do I want? I'm I playing with his soul? The read makes questions arise...well done penned to perfection.........novy


    • Mykeee
      November 25, 2007
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      LOL!! you know mom, you really don't know how right you are. It plays in my mind sometimes and sometimes you feel like is someone playing with you or are their thoughts sincere? really, really something I needed to write. ~ Thx ....Mykeee

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