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how do i feel

you asked me
how i feel
so ill tell you exactly

like an elephant
sinking in fat
like a lion
with no courage
like a loser
with bad friends

i feel like ive lost
in a important game
no love around me
and i dont know

like my friends
hate me and hide
like they think im
stupid and immature

i feel intimadating
to peole everywhere
like im a short monster
hiding in a box

i feel like i have
the face of michael
michael jackson
and cant get the mask of

i feel like im in a room
a brick room with only walls
the only things to talk to

i feel irritated with my life
because i cant do anything
like my annoying brother
is my conscionce

and lastly i feel
like i have a tube
that sucks out
my emotion
so im left dry as turkey

so telll me
how do you feel?

Author notes

stabdheart, my feelings unleashed on 11/25/07.

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  • blackday
    November 25, 2007

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    Your similes were original, but I just wasn't inspired. I think you have a lot to say & it was good for you to get it out. :]