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girls buy shoes to match their veins,
the cartography under flesh

telling them
the distance from popular opinion.

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name: narcissus at oasis

18 words

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  • Tangled Angle
    December 3, 2007

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    this was amazing.

    [would have prefered a more elaborated poem from you]
    but still...this is profound.


  • michichoeret
    November 26, 2007
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    wow

    short and profound