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Hidden Passion

Hidden away,
Where no one can see
This is my passion
This really is me
Nobody knows
How real I can be
Until they come
Into my imagery
My mind, my escape
My imagination
Everything
Is how I want it to be
No one hates,
Everybody loves
No depression
Or guilt
Everything is perfect

Take my hand and walk with me
Into my world of imagery
Know that I am here with you
Know that this is what I do
Escape with me, to another land
All you have to do is take my hand

Come with me, down to the stream
Where the water is clear, and the sunrays gleam
Join me, we're going to the great open hall
Everyone is here, we're having a ball.
The ball has now ended, accompany me
Down to the lakeside, we'll sit under a tree.
We'll talk, until the sun goes down
We'll keep talking while everyone gathers around
We're having a sing-song, a bonfire too
It is the way that we welcome you
We'll sing for the moon, we'll sing for the night
We'll sing until it is daylight

You've taken a peek,
Now come and join me
In my hidden passion
My world of imagery

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#3- Hidden Passion. I would like to be your sister.

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  • GoodKnightPoet
    November 27, 2007

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    I've taken a peek at this wonderful poem and I will take your hand and walk with you, so I can talk a while and get to know you. Great words and fantastic poem. I reslly like it very much.


  • Night Dweller
    November 26, 2007
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    It's awesome kt wahoo
    go kt go,go go kt
    lol


  • TacoSexyFail
    November 25, 2007
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    I love it! The ending ish perfct!


  • tealover1991
    November 25, 2007

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    Astoundingly Magnificent!!

    I'm glad you posted this poem up!! It's wonderful. I extremelty liked it!! It well written and well organized. Well done!! Award winning!!


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    November 25, 2007

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    Wow! Very abstract. And
    I love the imagery.
    Its like, you were
    taking me on a odyesy of
    your mind. Very creative
    and vivid. I liked it
    a lot!

  • Bottomofastairwell
    November 25, 2007
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    i love it. all of it. the emotion runs so deep i can almost feel it in my bones. lovely

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