I'm naked around you
All the walls that hid me from the world
Came crumbling down by one touch of your fingertip
I'm naked and unpretected around you
my soul in your hands
You hold my whole life in the palm of your hands
How did you get me to open up so easily
When previous attempts have failed
I'm naked around you once again
in your arms again tonight, and it feels so right!
A contest entry
- Picture Insipired, 10 Lines or Less/ 16 entries by mysticstorm.
600 points, ended November 26, 2007, 14 entries
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Comments
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I love this feeling. Where you can be so completely at ease with someone that you give yourself to them completely. I love this write. Great job.
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This is so very beautiful! A write of true trust and love...nice soft flow...I loved the repeat line, it added so much to your write.
Strong and well done.
Thank you for entering!
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