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Is it true?

Why am I up so late?
Words echo around my head
I kinda wanna know, so tell me
Is it true what he said?

I have noticed all the attention
That you have given me
But I never thought of this
As anything more, you see

I like you and I do think
That you are a nice guy
But I don't know what I would say
It's all so confusing! Oh why!

I've never really thought
About you much before
I don't think I've ever thought
If there could be any more

You don't know what I'm saying?
Well, I'm trying to be kind
But, yeah, I'll admit it is hard to see
If your eyes are blind

Alright, I'll say it like this
I've been told that you like me
I'm not sure, is it true?
I want to know, so tell me.

Author notes

The grammatical errors I have in here(kinda, wanna) are deliberate. Its actually like i'm having a conversation with the person I wrote this about. the sequel to this one is actually alternative ending. I wrote this one first but i got that one up first.

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  • JustAnotherIdoit
    December 1, 2007

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    swee-eet. although i dont like the 'guy' and 'oh my' thing but we're not trying to please me. lmao.
    still rally good.


  • TacoSexyFail
    November 25, 2007
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    Schweet I love it I love the rhyming! *goes to read more of your poetry...*


  • tealover1991
    November 25, 2007

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    Adorable!!

    I like it to a certain extent. I know how you feel though!! I'm goin through the exact same thing and it's driving me nuts!! But I did enjoy reading it, of course!!


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    November 25, 2007

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    These things happen in life
    they're there for a reason.
    How will you know the answer to
    your question if you never
    speak to him?
    (something to mull over)