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Day Dreaming Invades

Day dreaming invades
I remember your caress
I feel your touch
The sound of your voice
The taste of your kisses

Day dreaming invades
I remember your cologne
The blue of your eyes
The strength of your arms
The power of your embrace

Day dreaming invades
I remember tenderness
I see fireworks
The power of your love
Embellishes my daydream

Author notes

This is my first try at the Tanka form, I hope I got it right, or at least close.

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  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2007
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    Beautiful repeating linves addeed a nice taste to this one Well done poet!