Twist things around
Turn them upside-down
Make a change
It can't stay the same
Or it will turn out the way it was
I can't let that happen because
I've lost someone else in the same way
It might make me look stupid but hey,
I'm looking out to the future here
And so even though you want to be near
I am afraid I'll have to say no
But please let me tell you, before you go
I know how you feel, please let me explain
I don't want to cause anyone more pain
It might hurt for a while, but please don't pretend
If you hate, don't hurt me, I want to be your friend
I don't know if I could take anymore of it though
It seems so hard to get through this so
Maybe, I wouldn't mind for a day or two
I could try it, maybe I will, for you
But you'll know if its real or if its just a fling
Maybe, I might go for an alternative ending
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i like this heaps
really well put
but stanzas might help to break it up, give the eyes a break insteaD of having just one huge chiunk
great write
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w00t w00t I love poems that end with the title! Love em love em love em! rock on!
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*it WASN"T too bad though!!* made an error!!
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It was just a little confusing...
but it was too bad though. I didn't quite get it all but if I didn't was I supposed to?? I like this poem just cause it made me confused and made me think and question myself!! I think those are the beat poems!! Well done!!
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such emotion in this one! It runs over the pages! I love it!
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This is such a great write.I love the job you did on it.My feelings are so much like this that it isn't funny.You get to the heart of the matter.It was like you were saying exactly what I feel so much of the time.You picked just the right words to get your feelings across.Great job.
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like it. the background and the writing makes it look like the limewire logo, lol. sorry, had to add that
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