Emptiness filling my soul tonight
Don't know how to continue this fight
My soul feels black and cold from the pain
I don't know how I've managed to stay sane
Forgive me for all the mistakes I've made
Ive regretted every single one to this day
So alone in this world, with no one to care
It's almost as if I'm not even there
Author notes
Missing by evanescence
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Comments
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I'm a big fan of Evanescence, though Missing isn't really on my top favourite songs. Still it's good, and I really like how you got inspired by the actual song. The feeling are the same, but you still made it your own. I definitely relate to it. Great job!
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Perfect
Paints an emotional picture deep, real, and encompassing...
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