We think we have forever
But time slips away
So when you love someone
Let them know each day
Don't let them feel....
You really don't care
When in your mind
The words really stood there
Don't think your eyes would say
The words long to hear
It may never be understood
The feelings you can't make clear
Don't think a simple touch
Will get the message through
It takes more than that
To say I love you
So don't swallow your foolish pride
And keep what you feel inside
If you love someone
I don't think there's anything to hide
So before its too late
And the price you will pay
make it clear and simple
Love always makes you feel this way
Please tell me what you think
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yes ..I agree with you and with your point of view my friend..this is indeed and enlightening poetry and you touched the depth of the truth..well done...
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Excellent Poem
Yes this is really a good poem,i like how you expessed it,and worded it!And,i do agree you should tell the ones you love them cause anything can happen,and you may not be able to tell them,i love my man and tell him everyday!Even your family too.Thank you for sharing this poem,I think i will send it to my man David!Lisa k haslett raytown Missouri! -
how beautiful
it sounds like something ive written
loved it.
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this is so true. very nice message! keep up the good
work
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This is a very true piece. We can tell someone that we love them all the time but i feel we must show it all the time also. I love the flow of this wonderfully penned piece. Great job!
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That is so true, you have to let them know that you love them in everything you do. Because time waits for noone. Very good message you have written here and I thank you for sharing it with me...
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