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love hearts

a slither of colour
in a world so grey
these little hearts
on my mind prey
i feel them telling me
oh yes, i hear them say
"you know you shouldnt
but do it anyway"

someone says
i like your DP
oh look what they've done
theyve reminded me
your funny sayings
fill me with glee
i could eat 3 packets
in time for tea

you tell me you love me
im colourful writing
but i hardly look
im already biting
i dont want to laugh
but its to hard for me fighting
the urge to go hyper
it's really exciting

i know that i shouldnt
spend so much on you
i only spent
a pount or two
and then when im hyper
i just want to be through
with all the lessons
well thats nothing new

i have many photos
of your funny faces
they take up all
this macs hardrive spaces
im annoyed there arent
peanut traces
i dont buy ~THAT~ many
only three or four cases

this is one sorrow of mine
that brings me much joy
i'd rather have love hearts
than a new toy
katy always gets "kiss me"
she's fun to annoy
i reckon im addicted
hey swizzels - OI!

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 5, 2008
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    Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


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  • Misplaced Minds
    November 25, 2007
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    o_O

    Lol jess itas quite good with rhyming and stuff