coldness
invades me inside,
thought
floats in loose candle.
windy hand of ashes,
wave arid,
foam sketches smiles,
leaves here sitting in gardens,
doing nothing,
without sense,
soul takes off.
Author notes
Prompt: POETIC FOREPLAY
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A contest entry
- Prompt 16 entries 30 words more/ less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended November 26, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nicely different and creative take on the prompt.
Love the ending for it makes you feel the sense of true poetic foreplay.
Nicely done.
Thank you for entering! -
WHOA!!! this was differant and wonderful.
Very unique take. Best of luck to you in the contest
Delila
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