A rose by any other name
We've all heard before
Yet I know of one not the same
Let me tell you of the rose I adore
Beautiful to behold
Perfect, to me, in every way
Though a secret need to be told
A secret that haunts me day to day
A prick of the thorns sends poison through your veins
A poison so sweet you cannot get enough
You feel as if held to the rose by strong chains
People call me weak but to fight for this rose I am tough
How I long for that rose's touch again
I wish to feel that poison pulsing in my body
So to reach the rose this poem I do pen
So that the rose can see what it does embody
Please tell me what you think
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BEAUTIFUL
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awww
well im glad im stll poison to you! lol do you still remember my eyes? i remember yours... -
i rather like this
i think the flow is a little iffy though
but, i might just be saying it wrong in my head though
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Beautiful write so creative
I like the concept you used to describe the love for some one that you can't live with out. That has gotten deep under you skin and soul. Amazing write, I love these stance;
"How I long for that rose's touch again
I wish to feel that poison pulsing in my body
So to reach the rose this poem I do pen
So that the rose can see what it does embody "
LISA
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Beautifully penned.Thanks for sharing
Cheers
S
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