Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

[ Her. ]

Her.
She glides into
the Room,
an Angelic Vision
of Beauty
and Death,
a Precious Rose
with Poison Thorns.
She enfolds me in
Her tender embrace,
and leads me down
the Loving Path
to Hell.

Author notes

Did you ever meet a girl so alluring, yet so bad for you? You know you shouldn't, but you just can't help it? A poem to my ex. I still love her.

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • gullionmar
    February 8, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    nice

    well written james keep up the good work and thank you for serving our country