Blizzard of winter
night wind freezing to the bone
Warm inside your arms
A contest entry
- Winter Haiku by Swan song.
480 points, ended December 5, 2007, 23 entries
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wow, what wonderful imagery you have
portrayed in those few lines. I love how
the first line has the word blizzard (which
implies snow and cold) and in the second line
the word freezing and then ending with the word
warm in the third. It adds to the contrast.
wonderful. -
sweet
very nice write for the prompt . . like the contrast used . . also like "Warm inside your arms" . . !
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This is sensual and Japanesse people are excellent in their erotic haiku some of it is breah taking and leads much to the imgaination This is lovely
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This is a wonderful haiku; perfect syllable count and wonderful image. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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well done, Dad
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Short sweet and to the point. Nice job baby.
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