I am here, very near
You seem many miles away
Thoughts are soaring
Through the sky
On this cold and cloudy day
Need your warmth
And your smile
Tell me that you love me
Cannot heed a piece concrete
Drowning in a deep sea
I want laughter, love and joy
Sunshine, music and dance
Only these ingredients
Give our love a chance
Author notes
This is a cry for love, for it is hard
to love somebody who is always sad and cold.
A contest entry
- enter or die (jkjk jus another contest) by EmmaDilemma93.
415 points, ended November 30, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well said!
So true Anna, we need these and a lot of other ingredients to feel love, and yet there are those who find love in nothing, and yes I agree with you, it is very difficult to ;pve someone who is always sad and cold and emotionless. It is like making love to a stone - frustrating.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful write.
Love and light,
Lencio
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i like it
it's very good
seems lacking something
but that may be the point..?
idk
lol
goood write though
keep it up
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Indeed you got it.... lol.
Anna.
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Good job, although ...
I'd have said "I need your love", not "Need your love". Otherwise, I see nothing you need to do to change anything.
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I have said "I need your love"...
You probably mean
"I need your warmth"...
Do you? Anna.
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