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Sunset of My Heart

I try to watch the sunrise,
As beautiful as it seems.
My heart cannot pay attention
For its stuck in a world of dreams.

My imagination
Is where I like to play.
It is the only place
Where I can get away

Even in the early morning
When the first birds cry
My heart is sinking lower
In my emotional sky

Where can I escape
The only place that I have known
I look into the sunrise
A place to which many have flown

I can only get away
Just for a little while
Then I have to pretend
Just put on a brave smile.

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  • TacoSexyFail
    November 25, 2007
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    The title ish amazing! As is the poem


  • tealover1991
    November 25, 2007
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    Skillfully Adroit & Aces!!

    Honestly if you don't know what those words mean: Adroit means-skillful & Aces means-wonderful!! Just to make sure what I mean by those words! I absolutely LOVED this poem and I mean that!! I enjoyed reading it and I'm goin to enjoy some more of your young hearted poetry!!