Have you ever counted stars with someone besides you?
Have you ever broken down waves under your feet
Holding someone's hand?
Have you ever wished a wish seeing a fallen star?
I wished.
Star-crossed me! My loneliness wished you to be with me.
With your frown, with your smile
With your failure and with your success.
I wished you to be always here with me,
Hand in hand, shoulders so close
That I can smell your breath.
That I can feel you're living
Inhaling and exhaling
Before me.
I wished you to see the sky full of stars
Lying besides me, holding each other so tight.
I wish you to be mine forever.
I wish you to be with me forever
Cause you never know, May be I am the one
You’re seeking for.
A contest entry
- anything goes by Lola Green.
370 points, ended January 11, 2008, 35 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I want a lot of poems... by love my jose luis.
900 points, ended February 21, 2008, 125 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A very romantic poem.
I loved it.
Wish i could live those lines one day.
Great write.
Thanks for sharing
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This is a really cute poem... I really like this poem it's filled with love and I really liked it. Good luck in my contest.
~Maria -
Thanks a lot.
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this really touched me. very well done. thanks for entering
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Thank you for your comment.
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Cause you never know, May be I am the one
You’re seeking for.
I liked those lines
nice poem
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