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Prelude To A Kiss

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Prelude To A Kiss

 

 

 

For just that second time stands still

you want to kiss, you know you will.

 

Space between your parted lips

touch of skin on fingertips.

 

Tingles that excites you so

between the looks, your passions grow.

 

Drowning in each other's eyes

breath turns into sensual sighs.

 

Heartbeats quicken, souls on fire

bodies filling with desire.

 

Ever closer moist tongues tingle

sensations soon to meet and mingle.

 

Warm breath felt on naked cheek

heightened passions soon to peak.

 

Then the moment lips collide,

in-between tongues quickly slide.

 

For just one second, heated bliss,

eyes tight shut, for that first kiss.


 

 

 

 

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  • nevadapoet
    September 1, 2008
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    A beautiful write with your perfectly arranged words. Nice job...good luck.
    Nevadapoet


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 31, 2008

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    excellent~

    Ahhhhhhhhhh
    The perfect poem about a kiss
    Best of luck in the contest..love the pic too
    I entered this one as well
    Do hope you come give mine a read as well
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • punkbeauty
    August 29, 2008
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    Awesome...nicely done. Thanks for your entry.
    Nevadapoet

  • strangerforeigner
    August 29, 2008
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    Whew. This is a really good write. The only thing that bothers me is the line "juices soon to meet and tingle." the word juices, to me, is a little bit jarring, like a porn word used in a pg-rated poem. I don't know if that makes sense or not, but for me it caused a slight blip in the flow of the poem.
    Still an excellent write, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for entering!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    January 12, 2008
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    worthy of the throphy is this kiss. should have won gold.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 31, 2007

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    Sighs...the perfect kiss! Your words draw us in step by wonderful step until the lips finally meet...sighs..Awe! thank you so much for entering


  • individuality gold member
    December 30, 2007

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    a good piece here though i was put off a little with lack of grammar used for instance - others eyes - other's eyes, sorry call me a grammar nazi but those things i notice when reading other than that though, i did get into the feeling of the poem after reading and not paying attention to my niggly head


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    December 29, 2007

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    You know, I stumbled on this quite by accident, and I'm glad that I did because this is breathtaking! It just so happens that I wrote a poem with the exact same title.


    allpoetry.com/poem/3688980


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    December 24, 2007

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    mmmmm...sweet kisses...I like this very much! Kissing is just so very intimate and special! Enjoyed the poem and the rhyming. ***Pam***


  • Musimwa
    December 15, 2007
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    very good

    u deserve my applauds Mom. This piece flows. I love it. Thanks for the imagery well used. Good day.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 2, 2007
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    Beautiful Thoughts written down here, this is an Amazing piece of work. Excellent rhyme too.


  • absinthia
    November 28, 2007
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    love is an angel's kiss to the stars!!!


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    November 26, 2007

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    Brilliant writing. Very good imagery indeed. I love the rhyme in this. You described 'The Kiss' very very well Sue. Great flow. I could feel the longing and passion in this as well.. Well done.

    All the best
    Wayne

  • Francis Vincent
    November 25, 2007

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    very good

    wow
    that first kiss for me was a long time ago
    but
    your work was supreme
    really good
    brings back a lot



  • FrenchSuzette
    November 25, 2007
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    What a beautiful thought, I don't know whether I want to kiss you or find a man to kiss!


  • korculablue
    November 25, 2007

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    Wow!

    This is so sensual and I love it. As a widow I confess to remembering such kisses and they still thrill me just to remember.

    I felt the sweetness, and the throbbing of twin hearts. The two lined verses seem to lift the rising emotion and it increases throughout as the kiss grows nearer and nearer until the last verse when it happens. It is so beautiful, so "tremblingly" ecstatic. Thank you Susan

    korculablue

  • crab69
    November 25, 2007
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    Swee


  • Ellis gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    Holy Long Term Relationship

    I assume these are human beings
    We cats prefer rubbing noses
    For us slobber is exceeding
    What we like; we don't like hoses

    Tiki Cat
    Buy my cat food
    TIKI'S GOURMET CAT FOOD
    "Too Good For Humans"
    ---------


  • arafura gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    heated bliss...

    Now you've gone and burned a hole right through the monitor... this is great Suzie Q! The sensuality is subtle but very strong. The imagery is great and the rhyme perfect. Excellent!


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    From temple of Aphrodite

    forgot to mark you

  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 25, 2007
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    There lies a truth in a

    Kiss

    Loved it and felt it

    Powerful.

  • Bad Bill
    November 25, 2007
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    Sensual, romantic and perfectly formed--a definite pleasure to read.
    Bill

  • murren
    November 25, 2007
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    A beautiful poem. Expressed so well and heartfelt. Well done!

  • jaja08
    November 25, 2007
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    Really cool

    I really liked this poem, it kinda inspired me, thanks alot


  • tightrope
    November 25, 2007

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    Were you spying on me?

    This is just how it happened.

    Such a sensual and romantic poem! The rhyming is exceptional and the progession of phases of the kiss is right on.

    Beautiful.


  • moonbumps silver member
    November 25, 2007

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    The big kiss....I can hear it from here!
    Sensual romantic write from someone who's sensual and romantic.xxx


  • GoodKnightPoet
    November 25, 2007

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    It's all in a kiss. Kissing is a great way to communicate to another and time does stand still the moment lips collide. Great poem on kissing.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    actually i experience this each night at midnight with my love,,you have done well here young poet


  • Susan John Francis
    November 25, 2007
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    WOW!!!!!!!!! Really captures da moment ritht their .......

  • eye808
    November 25, 2007
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    you have really explored and described vividly the moments leadig to a kiss...excellent job!

  • Page Deleted.
    November 25, 2007

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    this is great, makes me want to grab my boyfriend and kiss him very beautifully written with a flawless rhythm, well done


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    November 25, 2007

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    Excellent

    This is Excellent the discription of a first kiss that is taken between two people is written so well here. A moment in time that is captured within ones heart and can never be replaced by any other feeling. The first connection that two souls share in becoming one with each other. You have done a brilliant job here in this poem capturing this moment well done Brian.


  • ceegeeess
    November 25, 2007

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    Eyes tight shut for this one kiss

    Just a second of heated bliss" with every kiss there is bliss in love. kiss is the key for the sea of romance and sex. nice write on the bliss of a kiss, sweet Sue




  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    Sparks erupt as lips now meet
    Ground has gone beneath the feet
    The world now spins the other way
    All has changed from this sweet day

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