i see the blade of crimson gold,
in the blood a story waits to be told.
as the blade dances across my wrist,
and the crimson blood runs down my fist,
i wonder where i went wrong.
i was allways pretending to be so strong
when really i was dieing inside.
suddenly all the emotions collide,
as i begin to go numb
i realize just what i've become.
i am the one who only wanted a chance,
all i wanted was a little romance,
instead i got stuck with this blade
don't worry now don't be afraid,
i came here tonight to die for you,
to show you that me love was true.
don't try and stop me cause its too late,
the blade of crimson gold has sealed my fate.
may pain be with you,
Payne
i am looking forward to bad commets so spill it!
Comments
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hmm, good use of words, bad poem
Love, when were married, your restricted to, 1 knife... -
typical EMU poem
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amazing.
I loved it!! No bad comments here. Please do not say it is bad or anything because its wonderful! I especially love it when you wrote:
instead i got stuck with this blade
don't worry now don't be afraid,
i came here tonight to die for you,
to show you that me love was true.
Truely beautiful
xx
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