I Am Here.
I am staying.
I will fight the fight,
That made you take flight.
I Am Here.
I am singing.
Pretty notes and chimes,
The words forever bound in rhymes.
I Am Here.
I am ready.
To take on the destruction,
To start a new wave of seduction.
I Am Here.
I am staying.
I have fought the fight,
That made you take flight.
Author notes
#6 - Anette replacing Tarja
This was written loosely from Anette's point of view at filling in Tarja's shoes. Like I said, loosely. And yes, it is meant to be so choppy and assertive. As if she is staking a claim on territory.
A contest entry
- 81st Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended November 25, 2007, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Though this poem it short, it seems complete and elapsed. From 'i will fight the fight' just 3 stanzas ago, to 'i have fought the fight'.
And as you said in your author notes, it seems assertive. It really shows Anette isn't going anywhere.
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YAY FOR SILVER
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I freaking LOVE IT!!! It could be written out a little more poetically but that doesn't even matter because I love how deep and true it is. I believe this is very close to what Anette's thoughts would be about Tarja. Fabulous job. It's always nice to get an entry from a fellow fan.
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gorguse baby
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very good
Nice one Rave , it should ne a mantra for everyone , 70 ??? another few and I got ya
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Haha.. More than a few mate!
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I fucking love bye bye beautiful.
And baby, this reminds me of something else. It's kind of what I hoped you'd feel like when you have someone close to you kill themselves. Not you particularly, just in general. Feels like you gotta fight for the sake of them. God I wish it felt that way, I wish there was a reason.
Baby I love you and I'm ok so don't worry about it and yeah, best of luck ok baby. Take care.
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LOL baby. It's as much for me as it is for the contest... you always gotta fight... think I'm getting better yet baby?
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