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A Beginning

Night's breeze seems to tease
as angels come from afar
a new soul to please, appease,

A babe's journey in life's gurney
as angels take watch and keep
cradled in loving arms to sleep

A lullaby of hope; a mother's prayer:
guard my child:
body, mind, spirit to be sound

May the world be one of peace
may You favor this soul with grace
may wisdom become the star of hope given

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Lee Taylor
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  • individuality gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, full of light and smiles that dance down the page with a feathered touch of love. a good poem.


  • Dogsandcows
    November 25, 2007
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    This write had a sense of peace and innocence. Thank you for sharing your words.Beautiful write!!!


    • Mystical-Gardenia
      November 25, 2007
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      Hello

      Thank you dogsandcows for taking the time to stop by and share your warm comments and welcome applause I'm delighted you enjoyed your visit here please stop by anytime

      Wishing you and yours a joyous Holiday Season


  • Gossamer Guile
    November 25, 2007

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    Amazing. Simply amazing. Your words are so powerful in this piece that the shape portion doesn't even need to come into play. You've most definitely impacted me. Well done.

    • Mystical-Gardenia
      November 25, 2007
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      Thank you so much

      Gossamer Guile for taking the time to stop by and share your warm, insightful thoughts I'm delighted this piece has touched you so. Often, we forget how powerful and poignant words can become

      Thank you for being such a wonderful contest host

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