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Memories

there are no path to run away from your wretched past
no medium to separate your sinful nature from immense divine chaste

they'll live as long you care
they'll hunt as long as you're there

mortals with the will to live on
as long as it take to see you suffocate, deteriorate till you're gone

they'll come alive in you're dream till you awake in frightening tears
there are no cure for your fears

memories don't live like people do
they always remember you

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  • Judith Chandler
    December 27, 2007

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    This is more of a reflective piece on memories than a mermory of any particular time. There is some vivid imagery but it's not what I asked for.

    Thank you for your entry.

  • Sacrificial Love
    November 29, 2007

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    wow....

    This is an intense thought...I mean... I have never thought about it in the sense that even if you try to forget the memories you own... the memories own you as well...

    OUTSTANDING.....

    xoxo
    Heidi


  • Blood Slurpie
    November 26, 2007
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    ah, that last bit is nice, very nice
    It's very refreshing, and makes my mind race.
    Kudos