Golden Beauties
Basking radiance
Show off a tale
One knows so well.
A holder of passion
with a solemn vow
and always there
for an open invitation.
A present of love
and promising of time
which in future
can make them mine.
In a list
A contest entry
- Chicks or Treats by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended December 9, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please do not critique it, I like nice comments not bad.
Comments
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I think you may need some energy to keep up with both of them (just know I would-lol). They may provide it from the start! I want to thank you for entering my "Chicks or Treats " contest.
Ted E
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Wonderful job on this piece and good luck in this contest!!!
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Sigh... Another beauty that flows to perfection
Well done sweetie and best of luck to you in the contest
Delila
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