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Energy and Flow of Harmony

The music moves around us all
Flowing even mightier in the small
Swirling and whispering in motion
Confounding and creating deep emotion

The music forms the art inside
Though the energy of the tide
Or resounding in a child's cry
It is gentle, but lifts us to fly

My art comes to me in a old form
Allowing me to escape from the norm
Words circle in my veins and mind
It is the paper for me and my kind

So at dawn or dusk, whatever the time
Look at these simple words that rhyme
Tell me what is moving through you
The harmony that is shining though

What high art did bring you here
Share with me these words without fear
There are no winners in this melody
So tell me love, what do you see? 

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  • Luthien Luinwe
    November 26, 2007

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    To the table I bring only my love for you. Our song,a dance in the basement,a kiss while watching the sunset,energy entwining us in passion, bodies moving in harmony. That my love is what I see.


  • spiral nocturne
    November 25, 2007

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    i really enjoyed this piece, especially since i do dlove music...so the musical inspiration or metaphor you are working with is quite lovely!