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Pretty Girl

Pretty girl, don't shy away
Let me pull you close

Pretty girl, don't fight with me
Your eyes, they're beautiful

Pretty girl, don't scream out loud
I want to move with you

Pretty girl, don't hit and run
I'll find you, soon or now.

Author notes

A strange little poem about the sexual assault of women and young girls. I guess it's about abusive relationships too, depends on how you look at it. Hope it's good, fairly weird, I know that. xD
Cj

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  • My Heroine .
    December 5, 2007

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    yepp, i didn't realize that it was about assult at first, but when i read your authors notes i realized it. lol. This was an amazing poem soooo great.
    xo
    Kandy


  • freespirit51 gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    WOW!! it may be a bit weird but your message gets across and that is the important part my friend. You did a great job and this may touch more people than you think. Great work..


  • Mishi-Ragdoll
    November 25, 2007

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    wow 0.o i didnt know it was about assault at first, but damn now that i reread it it has a deeper meaning to me now. keep on writing!


  • Dlvvanzor
    November 25, 2007

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    Oh wow, I didn't see this as abuse/assault until you mentioned it in your author notes! But now I definately see it. And now that I get it, the last two lines are really creepy.

    Great one!
    -Dlvvanzor