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Flight of My Soul

Awaken my child the moon is high
fly you shall, over the leafy bloom
with wings so incandescent

through my lips,
breaths of wind whisper your name,
as I think you a little fairy
pale as the lily with slumbers eyes

while stardust sprinkles
clover and dew
palm to palm, I hold you bearing my soul,
It’s now, I set you free.



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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    Lovely metaphor and sweet feel of love as you give her freedom to be.
    Very beautiful and strong.
    Really enjoyed this write.
    Thank you for entering!