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Rescued

Gently cradling,
admiring her beauty.

Watching as wings
gently unfold.

Grateful for
the hands that
saved her.

Rescued from
the spider's
hold.

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Picture prompt

A contest entry

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  • PureRomance
    November 25, 2007
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    This is truly a beautiful take on the picture. You did a marvelous and fantastic job with this piece. God bless you for sharing it and entering it into the contest and good luck. Keep up the excellent work and I'll continue reading it my dear poetic friend.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    Very nice flow. Nice take on the picture and creative write.
    Love the ending as it is unique.
    Thank you for entering!