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Safe in your light

Missing image
I feel it
like angels in the room
holding on to every moment
made for you to feel

I've landed upright
here upon your page
A tiny glimpse of certainty
that only you can tend

and so you keep me

away from the flame...

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    Lovely metaphor and nice end line. Very well written with nice flow and sweet meaning.

    Thank you for entering!


  • sheltered
    November 24, 2007

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    Damn that drunken honesty!
    I hope you will noit hate me though because I hold you in such high esteem