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She So Sexy

She's absolutely marvelous.
the way she talks is just so unique,
her words are like chocolate so creamy and sweet,
She's so sexy
from her head to her feet,
the look of perfection
she's good enough to eat.
Ms Sexy is her name
Absolute is what I call her,
if given a chance I would pamper and love her,
Damn,
she's so sexy
she's so fine,
a work of art,
so pure and divine,
I wrote this poem
from the depths of my mind,
so pardon me if this doesn't rhyme,
but damn,
She's just so sexy.

Author notes

This was written by my AP love. He knows how to make a woman wet. Keep writting boo.

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  • Galaxy2
    August 30, 2008

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    Oh yes...
    She is 100% sexy...
    and very much eatble, isn't she?

    Fascinating!
    I liked it...

    Kisses all over you, honey!
    Galaxy2


  • Maxboy gold member
    June 28, 2008
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    You are hot!!! I'll bet you are.


  • LadyLuff
    June 28, 2008
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    this is great!!



  • HoneyFire
    June 25, 2008
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    awwww. this is so sweet!


  • crazymomma
    June 11, 2008
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    This is amazing. I loved the rhyme and flow in this. Great job!


  • exceptforthis
    February 22, 2008

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    awesome! this is totally the right response to a sexy girl, i got a major hip hop vibe. sounds kind of like a rap, lots of good movement.


  • z etoile
    February 19, 2008
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    This is soooo sexy great job! Awesome! The emotion in this piece is incredible!


  • tarcus
    February 19, 2008
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    have we all not found "THE ONE" it is great when it happens hold on tight and dont let her go.

  • New-n-Improved
    February 18, 2008

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    Only For You

    I was just reading the poem and realized that I didn't leave a comment on this one. How could I be so blind. You are so sexy indeed and absolutely amazing. Keep writing and I will definitely keep reading.


  • Violent Glass
    February 16, 2008
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    damn she sounds hella fine
    great write


  • afroqban
    December 9, 2007
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    ahh yeah this is hot. good work


  • Mykeee
    December 5, 2007
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    interesting. Great way to blend in two minds for one great piece. Nicely done.


  • Pain Angel
    November 30, 2007
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    daaammnn! i bet she is the finest girl alive!


  • Ephiphany
    November 28, 2007
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    Definately a Phenomenaul piece

    I loved this yall...Collabo is amazing always.
    keep writing my Talented friends.

    Ephiphany


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    November 24, 2007
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    You are explicit ineed.

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