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Remember

Though the mouth is
sewn shut
The eyes
they still
remember
Remember the pain

Pain

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 24, 2007
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    Quite sad and emotion driven... x


  • HeavenScent4U
    November 24, 2007

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    well this is definitely dark and foreboding now i'm scared so i'm going to leave. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed