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Katie's best feature

She looked at a mirror and gazed at her reflection,
She put all of her features under close inspection.

Putting down her apperance,wishing she was thinner  or taller,
Not seeing how shallow wishes only made her smaller.

"Pick a feature like" I asked, I knew the trouble had begun,
I could tell through her silence she couldn't think of one.

Sighing I spoke to her "I wish I could make it clearer,
It's whats on the inside that counts not what you see in the mirror"

"Katie you should have known this from the very start,
What makes you truly beautiful , your best feature, is your heart.

no criticism no comments this is for Katie who needs to love herself

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  • SoxxDisastrous
    November 24, 2007

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    Wow...no one has ever written a poem about me before. Hmm... Well, first I must thank you. It's very nice of you to do this. Even if part of it is a lie.. But that doesn't matter. You are a very amazing person and a very amazing friend.