It was never my intention
to break your heart
Please pardon me.
But glancing through our
[MATCHBOX MEMORIES]
maybe a [broken] heart is
all I ever wanted from you
so go ahead and
[fake a smile]
pretend it was all
O K A Y
Go ahead
it'll be a while
before I say
[I] [A M] [S O R R Y]
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Written October 24th, 2003
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OOOOh! I love it!!! It is so short, and it says so much, and thats awesome. If it were longer, and i had more time, then i would quote the last stanza, and say that I loved it. I also like that it was kinda a visual thing this time with the words. It makes the poem more interesting to read. Great great job. rock n roll
~Lauren~ -
What i give is all you gave yet ten times less.
Tho 1st I assumed equalness.
And now I want more.
riveting and real poem. I felt your emotions thruout. Thanx for the poem and the thoughts.
Terrell -
maybe a [broken] heart is
all I ever wanted from you
amazing... i can especially relate to those lines ^ sometimes you need to hurt to know you can still feel (i think i stole that from an old marilyn manson song... not entirly sure). anyways... i love it... very good. emilie xx -
matchbox twenty.
:sigh: i enjoyed this..
"maybe a [broken] heart is
all I ever wanted from you"
reminds me of how i feel, everyday. you're so talented, kala. i love it. and you. <3 Jena -
first off, i love the title. real catchy and stuff. the poem was great to. the last stanza i can relate to, specially now a days. completicated stuff, man.
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