Perked in purples, a masterpiece begins,
Amber hues dribble from chin.
Indigo nights trickle the thighs,
Neon lips parting with sighs.
Taint me in paint, a work of art to devise.
Mauve liquid runs down nipples erect,
Excitement builds, what did you expect?
Irridescent glow buds from my rose,
Nurturing the best of you, that grows.
Edible art from bottom on up,
Crimson petals for you to sup.
Spread eagle and waiting - evening delight,
Taste the rainbow within your sight.
Add a flick of the tongue, and brush with ease,
Suckling your creation, down on your knees.
Yes baby, you're an artist, give me more - please!
Author notes
Erotic painting.
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In a list
A contest entry
- Painted Erotic (Adults Only) by Tears of Roses.
450 points, ended December 10, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh, your writes are delightfully wicked! Nice use of colors and words to describe a very sexy moment! ~SoAp
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The menu is filled with nothing but tasteful delights in this write! You were truly creative with your writing especially to make it an acrostic erotica. Congrats on the Bronze Trophy!
Ted E
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Speechless!
Perked in purples, a masterpiece begins,
Amber hues dribble from chin.
Indigo nights trickle the thighs,
Neon lips parting with sighs.
Taint me in paint, a work of art to devise.
"A masterpiece begins?" I couldn't agree more. Excellent rhyme! You have painted seduction in more ways than one. Just a brilliant write!! Bravo!
Don
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Wow! This is hot as hades and steamy as a sauna. Lordy this is good. Another vivid and exciting experience from the pleasure of your pen. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Amazing rhyme, beautiful use of color, provocative and memorable imagery. Very delicious, as always.
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WOW wonderful
I loved your sensual paint brush.
And all the colors you painted with.
ENCORE
Roses to you
Teresa
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