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I used to be...

I used to be a bee,
                        taking risks in the world.
                                                                But now I am a bear,
                                                                                            Just going and not looking back.

     
                                                  I used to be a ghost,
afraid and hiding from everybody,
                                                    But now I am a girl,
                                                                                coming out of my secret hiding spot.

                           

                                                      I used to be a flower,
                                            hidden under the deep snow waiting to come out.
                            But now I am the rose,
  blooming in your backyard.
                            I used to be a little cat,
                                      hiding from the real world.
                                                  But now I am a bird,
                                                                  looking and understanding the world.

                                               

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  • alinee-beenee
    April 16, 2008
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    hi


  • Beating gold member
    December 1, 2007

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    oh. this is really sweet. I really like how you kind of play with the words and go from one thing to another. It made me smile. Good job!