I feel like im broken in to a million pieces
like my heart just cant hold on anymore
Every day that goes by feels like the pain increases
I used to know what I want in life, now im not sure
Im tired of picturing someone with me
Just to have them hurt me and disappear
Whats the point of making plans with no guarantee
It's like the world is ending as I cry a single tear
Broken, drained, hurt, and battered
All those words you said were lies
I loved you like nothing else mattered
Now there is only pain in my eyes
You had my heart in the palm of your hand
Guess you decided to take advantage of it
Now nothing is going as planned
I was ready but you couldnt commit
You were my world, my life
Then I heard you met someone new
I cant believe you would ask me to be your wife
Then break my heart like I meant nothing to you
I'm not sure what happens now
My heart has been broken and pushed down
If it will ever be healed Im not sure how
It struggles to lift itself up from the ground
So for now my heart and I lay here
Hopeless and hurting once again
As I cry yet another tear
I wonder when the pain will end
Author notes
She's nothing you'll ever know, succumbing to perfection, lost in translation
option 1
Sell me another lie, break my heart...again
A contest entry
- [Sell me lie after lie, break my heart time after time, Tell me that you love me always] by over the rainbow--x.
525 points, ended January 19, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any advice?
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It definitely hurts when one leaves us for another. I know as the 2 I loved did that to me. "Iam tired of picturing someone w/ me just to have them hurt me and disappear" Its hard to believe at these times but with time you will have someone you pictured with you and it will be forever! Very well written!!
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Okie, first of all, finalist [= This was really good, really really good [=
Advice, I think the only advice I can give you is to live day by day, It comes to a point where the person who we love, && find so intoxicating, is damaging us more than helping, && it's sad, but we have to accept that. I've been through something kinda similar recently && I keep letting him, soon i'll use my own advice.
If you ever need to talk, you can just message me [=
Thanks for entering [=
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I'll put an end to your pain when ever you're ready to sail away
Joe
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Get on your feet and keep on going........I've a strong feeling you can do it!
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starting to think ur feelings are wrong on this...
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AAWWWWWW
Beautiful view on your thoughts--I love it.
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Good write, these past few poem have been really good
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wow O.O deeeep ilike the ryme schyme it was good and wuts weird thats how i felt after my first broken heart....*tear* i dont noe u but im srry....*sniff*
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Shhhh Little one, I'll listen to you cry--the pain might last awhile, but I'll be your friend if you want
Joe
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Let me help you with your pain.
Let me be the shoulder to cry on.
Let me fill a void
It's hard to forget, yet time will heal -
Been there on more than one occasion.
They play with you as an illusion
only letting you see
what they want you to see.
Roses to you
Teresa
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This is so sad
Im sorry sweety hang in there.Much love to you always. I have no life answers becuase my life is a mess at times and right now i am struggling to keep my head up but dont ever give up much love
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Men suck I swear wraps arms around you much love
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