I'm waiting for world to change,
So everyone will see,
Life without war and hunger and such,
Without homophobics and poverty.
I'm waiting for the love of my life,
To come and sweep me away,
And every minute I'd love them more,
We'd grow with every day.
I'm waiting for my taste of fame,
For only five minutes; or ten,
But once the audience saw me once,
They'd want me again and again.
I'm waiting for the government to change,
And actually stick to their word,
The money wouldn't matter; they'd just want to help,
Would it really be that absurb?
I'm waiting for a lot of things,
A few may actually come true,
But am I really waiting; or wishing hard,
I really don't have a clue.
Author notes
Option 5 of a contest.
A contest entry
- enter or die (jkjk jus another contest) by EmmaDilemma93.
415 points, ended November 30, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i dont know what i want... do you guys?
Comments
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish I could write that well- and I must say this is ABSOLUTELY the best poem I've ever read on the site!!!!
I'm waiting for all those things, and wishing too... There isn't much difference
I would really like you to message me and we can read eachothers poetry and stuff- This is the longest comment I've ever written, and I have to say, you DESERVE IT!!!!
Vivien
PS.WOW
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PPPPPPPPS. WOW INFINITY TIMES!!!!!
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great
absolutely great
wow
wow wow wow
i love it
perfect
deff. what i was loooking for
i've had such a great turn out for this contest =]]
thanks =]
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I like this one. A wise poet said to me that you shouldnt write for the contests, but write for yourself. But sometimes you can't wait for things to happen, you gotta make it happen.
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