There she stood all in white
This day was suppose to be right
Butterflies invaded her inside
From men of the world she now must hide
A life she did not choose
A life she now had to lose
Her last name she'll no longer know
A new face she must now show
In their seats they all await
For the lady in white to meet her mate
Her song now began to play
Two will be one on this day
As she walk down the path
Only one was in her heart
This love she knew would never be
So she did something to set her free
A new colour stained her dress
A blazing red left her chest
This bride was no more
Her spirit smiled and left the door
A contest entry
- No place to put it..... by Menace.
2250 points, ended December 11, 2007, 32 entries
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Peer Pressure :)
A touchingly beautiful write; great work!
Thankyou for sharing, and best of luck in the contest
Maria
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hi there this is really good, but work on your rhyme in the first stanza it's a bit off..... this has a great story, this is something I would read
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hehehe
A twisted little plot you have here. Made me giggle and wonder how many people will read this and never catch that ending. I think this would have hit me harder if it was more freewrite and less rhyming. The plot is like "wow", but the form is just "matter of fact".
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this is an awsome poem i really enjoyed reading it im going to read it more then once for sure
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