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Sunshine. First Song i wrote, Duet, man & Woman.

{{{verse 1}}}
F - Yes, I know he's a dork but i love him anyway
M - Yes i know, she's so weird but i love her anyway

F- And I know we're not all the same
M- Coz life's not a video game
F- You bring the best out of me
M- Coz perfects all i see
F- And I know that i don't know much at all
M- But I know that I'd catch you if you fall

{{{Chorus}}
F:Hooray      It's just another day
M:      Hooray It's just another day

F: Without you
M:            my pain can't hide away
F:                  is missing from my day
M: Laughter and joy

F: So boy, don't you take my sunshine away
M: So girl, don't you take my sunshine away

{{{verse 2}}}
M: I'm sorry for all the pain
F: You put me through
M: Don't you know the only one i've ever loved
F: Is you

F: And I don't know how
M: And i don't know why
F: How can I still love you
M: WHen you make me cry?

{{{Chorus}}
F:Hooray      It's just another day
M:      Hooray It's just another day

F: Without you
M:            my pain can't hide away
F:                  is missing from my day
M: Laughter and joy

F: So boy, don't you take my sunshine away
M: So girl, don't you take my sunshine away

F: Oh don't you run away
M: I don't know how I'd live without you
F: Don't you take my sunshine away
M: Leaving is something i couldn't do
F: So don't you take my sunshine away
M: Don't you take my sunshine away


Please dont use big words, i'm not as smart as i'd like to be.

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  • Wolf Heart
    November 26, 2007

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    i like it! you should seperate the female&male from each line of music otherwise it gets confusing. But i do like it...as for a melody to it...hmmmm....i can think on one....


  • x--nocturnia--x
    November 26, 2007
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    Nice! I like this, it's coool it reflects love very well. Can;t imagine the melody, though...
    Good job.


  • x--nocturnia--x
    November 26, 2007

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    Nice! I like this, it's coool it reflects love very well. Can;t imagine the melody, though...
    Good job.


  • musik-freek
    November 25, 2007

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    Its cool! please record it i'd like to know what it would sound like as a song. i liked it. "dont take my sunshine away" its like telling each other not to leave. really sweet.