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my angel

it's you,
the angel,
from my dreams,
my nightmares.

you lightened my dreams,
scared away my nightmares,
soothed my racing heart,
never leaving me.

you lead me,
you guide me,
along this road,
of darkness and sorrow.

this road leads straight,
but with many turning points,
one of them,
leads to happiness.

the problem is,
that how do i know,
which one,
leads this.

you,
my angels,
you say,
trial and error.

so far its been error,
after error,
my trust in you is waning,
but you hold strong to me.

you guide me,
advise me,
you comfort me,
soothe me.

dont leave me,
alone,
in this couls place,
the forbidding looks within.

you say,
"don't worry follow your heart"
the problem is that,
i follow my heart,
i follow you,
my angel.

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    Very nice verse to accompany this pic! I can so totally relate to taking wrong turns myself!!! This was a wonderful write and I truly enjoyed reading it!!! Thanks for entering and best of luck!!!

    Blessings~
    Az