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society blues. ... if you don't like it dont read it

Isn't it funny
How we care
So much about ourselves
That we forget to care for others?

Isn't it funny
How much we will cry
Over something stupid
While others have cried their last tears?

Isn't it funny
How we are blinded
By our own misfortune
That we don't see our lucky we are?

And isn't it funny
That while reading this poem
Instead of thinking of others
You were thinking of yourself?

Please dont use big words, i'm not as smart as i'd like to be.

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  • musik-freek
    November 25, 2007
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    Umm, ok?

    Don't be offended but I never really thought of you to be the sort of person who would write about this sort of stuff. actually, i was thinking about the title of the poem as i wrote it. very thought provoking, and different(in a good way) from your normal style.


  • just-a-gurl
    November 24, 2007

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    actually I wasnt (thinking of myself)... i was thinking of you... and of societies views on such things-

    interesting write.