Can you wait?
is the tension to much
is the suspense like
anything you ever ignored
before or plan to ignore
there is no doubt...
only four days to go
this will be a day to remember...
(I wrote a poem about it
Though I haven't the mind
right now to recall it
it was wrote on T.P.
a long poem every word worth
its weight,but I had to wipe...)
you know what happens in three days
from now....well guess
you'll never guess ...
I'll tell ya'
in two days
there is a special reason
something truly worth
your and our attention
now excuse me
the day is upon us
....sorry ...ca....
....like a ....
(chuckles and stares
into__ the distance)
... too busy to finish
you should have been there
if only you had waited like
me
A contest entry
- You Inner Psycho by Oedhel.
300 points, ended December 12, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
stop the clock and think about the time you lost
Comments
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THIS WAS REALY VERY GOOD
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Dementia effects the perception of time
I see this in Manic Depressive people alot serial killers are subject to time displacia as well.
Glad you liked it intresting contest as well.
In crayon,
Dabbler
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